I am a year 8 at Edmund Hillary School. I live in Auckland N.Z, I am in room 10 and my teacher is Nikita Henwood. Feel free to read and comment on my blog.
Hey there Christina, You are definitely bang on with this presentation,There are definitely certain things that need to be kept from the internet and things that should be Revealed* to the internet...
Talofa Lava,Christina! I really liked how you presented your work about what you should keep online and what you shouldn’t. I like how you tell other people to let them know what to keep private, in case people would post personal stuff. Next time, I think you should re-check it before you post. I don’t really think that revealing your favourite hobby is bad because you can let other people know what you really enjoy!. Besides all of that your work was amazing!.
Kia ora Christina I liked the way you set your work up it is really nice. When I read your blog post I learnt a few things on what to share on the internet and what to not share on the internet. Next time you should probably re - check your work before you post it because I found a lot of spelling mistakes. I also saw that you put a few things in the wrong place.
Hello Christina , I really like how you put catchy colors into your work, You have worked really well and it is really outstanding, When I read your post I learnt that something wrong can be changed to something right. Maybe next time you can try to use a bigger font and a clear text box. How did you manage to get a good solution?
Kia Ora Christina next time you could re-read your sentences once you post them, but besides that your work was absolutely outstanding.When I read your post I learnt that everything is not true online.
Hi Christina I liked the way you put those photos on your writing My favorite part was when you told me what I should keep secret and what I can reveille.
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Hey there Christina, You are definitely bang on with this presentation,There are definitely certain things that need to be kept from the internet and things that should be Revealed* to the internet...
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Talofa Lava,Christina!
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you presented your work about what you should keep online and what you shouldn’t. I like how you tell other people to let them know what to keep private, in case people would post personal stuff. Next time, I think you should re-check it before you post. I don’t really think that revealing your favourite hobby is bad because you can let other people know what you really enjoy!. Besides all of that your work was amazing!.
Kind Regards,
Roseena
Kia ora Christina I liked the way you set your work up it is really nice. When I read your blog post I learnt a few things on what to share on the internet and what to not share on the internet. Next time you should probably re - check your work before you post it because I found a lot of spelling mistakes. I also saw that you put a few things in the wrong place.
ReplyDeleteHello Christina , I really like how you put catchy colors into your work, You have worked really well and it is really outstanding, When I read your post I learnt that something wrong can be changed to something right. Maybe next time you can try to use a bigger font and a clear text box. How did you manage to get a good solution?
ReplyDeleteKind Regards: Teresa
Hey Christina, you are doing amazing on your post about keeping you safe online and your photos are cool and eye catching.
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Kia Ora Christina next time you could re-read your sentences once you post them, but besides that your work was absolutely outstanding.When I read your post I learnt that everything is not true online.
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ReplyDeleteI liked the way you put those photos on your writing
My favorite part was when you told me what I should keep secret and what I can reveille.
Estherbella
Maloolelei christina I liked the work that you done thank you
ReplyDeleteHi Christina I Like Photo on your writing My Favorite is what my should dont give up from Rosalina
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